Mr Wheelwright has been an enthusiastic visitor during the last two super scribbler sessions, as he really enjoys writing. He also was curious to see the creative writing beng produced as he had heard so many good things about you super scribblers!He couldn't resist having a go at his own mini sagas and managed to write some that were exactly 50 words - typical! His favourite one is below; I'm sure he'd love to hear your comments on it.
Stepping from the ship onto the cool, wet sand of home, my chest rose fully as if I was breathing for the first time in 20 years. The wars had been terrible, but it was finally over. Inhaling for the second time, I noticed a bitter taste in the air.
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